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Have you ever seen this kind of event?
We work with intention
We are proud that the job has been completed even though we are newbies.
"the job is done"
" it's good... well, it's done this early. Will the storm come in?
Let's see here yet... a little more detailed here.
I will fix it here a little bit... fix it there a little bit. Blah blah blah blah "
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Does the word "good" in the beginning of the sentence still make me happy?
Do we like the boss like this?
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So change the situation
"Mommy, I took a shower today too"
" Let's see if you clean the soap and scrub the back of your ears too.
Did you just wash your feet? If you clean the soap, it's not clean... blah blah blah "
"Mommy, I finished my homework today"
"Let's see if it's done.. OK... if you can do it yourself every day, mother doesn't have to have to wet mouth"
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We don't like it
The model above is nagging, sarcastic.
But we used cuddle of those skills
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Most of the problems in communication between mother and son.
Not mom don't talk
But Mom said things that don't need to be said too much
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Today I will share the technique #Yuan and #full _ stop
Actually, it is.
หลักการ Let them Learn, let them grow
Learn from your own mistakes
To develop your own skills.
No one can be good at other people's mouth. You have to do it yourself and
Believe that children have an instinct to develop.
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Easy to say but not easy
Especially those of us surrounded by negative communication.
Haha. I intend to be determined that I will not be like someone I don't like his talk.
We will not take the speaking skills that we don't like to talk to kids.
We will practice communicating cuddle kids because our words have a lot of influence on your growth.
2. If you let your child do something by yourself.. Repeat, if anything decides to let your child do it yourself from beginning to end, it means we trust that he can do it.
I have to recite the spell in my heart #Yuan Yuan
The first time he did it, it was done. No need to assess the result. Cuddle baht.
Next time, if there is a spot to fix it, teach more.
I'm going to take a shower and I feel clean. It's all about him. After taking shower, it's yu
Next time, I will recommend it again. If you don't clean it, I recommend you to wash more.
" there is still a little bubble after. Let's go wash it again. (Fullstop don't talk too much)
Wash the dishes. There will be some oily stains. I'm afraid that I can't clean the
Let's remember that... Yuan (if you can't stand it, you will sneak up again, but don't destroy your pride)
3. Know how to put a full stop mark. Finish the sentence.
(can i borrow my teacher's words because I like it very much)
We still have a lot of time with the baby
No need to teach everything today
Learn to speak one necessary sentence
Finish the sentence!
Unnecessary sentences.. Swallow some
The good thing is
Only say the most important thing that I want to press.
The Listener understands what they want to say immediately.
And then
People who only say what others can benefit
There are only people who want to listen.
Practice often. I will be the one who wants to listen.
Not only for you.
Haha. If you can't talk only good things, don't say it.
Beware of honey razor blade compliments
To watch people is sending positive energy through our words.
If in a sentence there is a word that the media means negative....
And can't figure out how to watch it
Just smile thin and implying my eyes are gentle.
Or smile and Pat your head.
Don't say things like this to a child
Nice... did you take the wrong medicine today?
I can do this in the beginning... Mother doesn't have to be like this.
I guess it's raining today. The storm will come in.
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Speak.... for!!!!!
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Do you think you can do this?
Thinking about developing yourself for kids.
Communication skills are the first skill that you need to practice.
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Remember this again
Kids are not what we teach.
You are who we are.
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How do you want you to be.... be first.
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Doctor PamTranslated
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Don’t get overawed (Lee Yee)
On the day that the National Security Law was passed by the National People’s Congress, I got a message of a friend from afar: “Are you secure?” I answered without even giving it a thought: ”No one is secure in a secure country.”
When maximal authority of a country is realized, individual rights are so minimal that no one is secure. Even in China where the plebs would answer with a big NO, are people in power secure? Was Liu Shaoqi, the late Chairman of the People’s Republic of China persecuted to death during the Cultural Revolution, secure? In the past 70 years, have most of the people in power of different levels been secure in view of the miseries they have encountered? Was and is Jiang Zemin, the former General Secretary of the Chinese Communist Party(CCP), secure? Is Xi Jinping secure?
The befalling of the National Security Law is likened to “the second handover of Hong Kong”. An online article points out “the difference between the first and second handover” is that “the people who resent the CCP in 2020 is countless times more than those in 1997, and in terms of reputation, conduct and calibre, the people who espouse the second handover in 2020 are not even comparable to those who espouse the first handover in 1997”. Another says that “Hong Kongers belonging to no country before handover used to live in peace and work with contentment”, and asks “where their homes are when they belong to a nation”? In China, even the movers and shakers evacuate their relatives by fair means or foul from their country to a strange place they call home in the West.
The Articles of the Hong Kong version of National Security Law was not announced until it took effect, so that Carrie Lam was unable to utter a word about the details of it on the day of implementation of the Law. Legislation as such is preposterous. The full text of it is awash with equivocal meanings of unfinished wordings, which is so jaw-dropping that even a layman would ask: What kind of legal document is that? Zhao Sile, a journalist from China, said online: “The Law is typically from China because the laws of China have always been ambiguous and ill-defined”. She continued, “How are they enforced? Arbitrary and flexible provisions are made by different administrative departments which then inflate in power unceasingly.”
Regarding the abovementioned, it is almost pointless to delve into every Article of it for clarifying under what circumstances does one offend and not offend the Law, and where the grey areas are. Take those dubbed the “four ringleaders of Hong Kong independence” and “gang of four that jeopardizes Hong Kong” by Chinese media as an example. While they are known to be opposed to Hong Kong independence and even anti-localist, and did not advocate the protest last year, China deems them to be guilty of all of the above by dismissing the actuality. Subsequently, some budding political groups disbanded in no time. However, if the CCP decides to recriminate, on no account can they escape. That being said, it is possible that China will sit on the issue of Hong Kong independence provisionally in an attempt to dilute the sanctions against it from overseas. With the arbitrariness and flexibility of laws of China and its enforcement, no one is secure, nor one is doomed to committing a crime. Falling into a trap is simply akin to running into a car accident.
Looking at the National Security Law, Hong Kongers, who are accustomed to living under the rule of law, will naturally get frightened and anxiety-ridden, and try to wash their hands of sensitive issues. They think they will stay secure by stopping short of slogans with content of “secession of state” or disbanding a political group. In reality, if the CCP wants to get you in trouble, it does not have to leverage the National Security Law. Manipulated by the CCP, the SAR government can do and will do whatever stipulated by the National Security Law. Is the Law retroactive? Wasn’t the disqualification sentence for Leung Chunghang and Yau Waiching, former Legislative Council members, retroactive? And the judge that brought in the verdict based on retroactivity was Andrew Cheung Kuinung, the next Chief Justice of the Court of Final Appeal to-be. Does it make sense to contemplate upon the situation differently before and after the enactment of the National Security Law?
Now that the CCP can do whatever it wants. Is the enactment of the National Security Law an unnecessary move? As Chinese officials said, the Law, like a sword dangling above Hong Kongers, is to get them overawed and frightened.
Scared? Surely. Yet, one should have been scared much earlier on. If one had been scared, one would have arranged for fleeing from Hong Kong. Those who choose to stay should not let fear take control of them.
I have always remembered what British writer Salman Rushdie wrote after September 11 attacks in 2001: “Amid the conflict between liberty and security, we should always opt to stand with liberty without remorse even though we make a wrong choice. How do we beat terrorism? Don’t get overawed and don’t let fear take control of you even though you are scared.”
The late U.S. President Franklin Roosevelt said, “The only thing we have to fear is fear itself.” If we let fear take control of us, we give up liberty.
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下午上完了這學年最後一堂英文作文(二)的課,又過了一年。教了十多年的英作,今年這一班學習的態度認真而上進,實在是很讓人喜歡的一個班。
從上學期段落式的topic sentence(主題句),到最後整篇文章的thesis statement,不管大家寫得多痛苦,我們走過來了。但是其實英文作文最難的部份追根究底還是主題句,我不確定中文作文有沒有類似的掌控段落的概念。但如果能夠把主題句寫好,段落就不會有問題;能夠將thesis statement寫好,全文就能連貫而一統。因為主題句就是為了控制我們的思路,將我們所有的想法和論點控制在一個數十到數百字段落的範圍裡。因此,主題句的組成,是你想談的主題加上「一個」論點。之所以將「一個」標上引號,正是主題句的重點之一:一個主題句只能有一個論點,也就是說一個段落只針對一個單一論點來談。而主題句的功用,正是讓我們去組織和統合我們的論點,讓我們不會離題,讓我們的思想前後連貫。因此,主題句的論點(argument),又被稱為controlling idea或focus,因為它管控著我們的思路,凝聚著我們的焦點。這個argument/controlling idea/focus如果能夠寫好,那這個段落就能夠寫得順暢,因為,我們唯一要做的事,就只是去支持和解釋我們的論點。比如「Cell phones are indispensable business tools」這個主題句,cell phones是主題,而它是indispensable business tools是argument,所以這個段落唯一要做的是就只需要在下面解釋為何行動電話做為business tools(被限定範圍)是不可或缺的就好了。而同樣的主題,也會因為論點的不同,而產生不同的段落。像是同樣以cell phones當主題的話,如果寫了「Cell phones are annoying gadgets」的話,那這個段落就變成作者要解釋為何行動電話會如此地惱人了。
不過,也必須要有一個好的argument,才能讓文章和段落能夠順利發展。比如如果主題句是「Too many people treat animals badly in experiments」,雖然可以猜出要談的是動物被不當用於實驗中,但因為沒有寫出What people? Badly how? What kinds of experiments?,因此段落的發展就會沒有方向。因此給它argument就是給它focus,如果將哪些人,什麼樣的壞和什麼樣的實驗加入的話,我們可以寫成:「The cosmetic industry often harms animals in unnecessary experiments designed to test products」。在這樣的主題句之下,我們下面寫起來就簡單了。和讀者解釋化妝品產業為了測試產品對動物做哪些不必要的實驗,又為何沒必要,簡單、清楚而明瞭。
而在最後幾個禮拜的進度裡,關於文章中的語氣(tone)所要避免的問題,也是台灣最常見的。像是「invective」,也就是以指責和輕視的方式行文:「智力測驗的時候到了」、「智商低才會相信」、「這個文章只有小學生程度」之類的,不以理性論述來說服讀者的文章;或是「flippancy or cuteness」,在文章中油腔滑調:「好開心啊 哈哈」;「sentimentality」,不用證據和理性論點說服讀者,卻用「My dog, Cuddles, is the sweetest, cutest, most precious little puppy dog in the whole world, and she will always be my best friend」這種cheap emotion等。
至於結尾,還有一個常見的問題是either/or,也就是如果你不認同我,你就是無知/錯誤/自私/沒品味的人的寫法。這個寫法在網路文章中最常看到的,就是如果你沒吃過xxx,就別說你真的吃過xxx。
照片從左到右是我常用的英作教材,按程度高低,最左邊是句型練習、中間是段落練習,而最右邊則是從段落到寫作細節與各類文體的英作專書。
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